It needs a lot of improvement. The animation along with the voice overs were not that desirable. the plot was ok though. i get what you're trying to convey but it wasn't really clear. I mean, i'm assuming your still new to this (i am too and i got the same criticism) so you shouldn't stop at this and take my advise to consideration. if you try to apply yourself more and try your best to improve everything, you could make something amazing but you need more time